Self-Introduction Letter (UPDATED)
Subject: Introducing Kristine Dear Professor Blackstone, My name is Kristine Yap, a Year 1 student in your Critical Thinking and Communicating Module, and I am writing to introduce myself and share a bit about who I am. I graduated from Singapore Polytechnic and attained my Diploma in Mechanical Engineering in 2019, I soon after stepped into the workforce, gaining about 3-4 months of experience as a Full-time Associate Engineer, before deciding to pursue my degree in Mechanical Engineering. One of my communication strengths is providing empathic feedback. Being a camp coach, I felt the need to give constructive criticism and praise in a way that acknowledges the feelings of not only my kids but to any individual. This helps maintain positive relationships while addressing issues effectively. On the other hand, a communication weakness I realised in myself is that I have the tendency to ramble during conversations or explaining certain subjects. I sometimes provide excessive or
Hello Kristine, thanks for posting this pitch, I think you are very well articulated and went in-depth about why you should deserve this spot. Overall, I think it was a good pitch, but if I have to point out one negative, I would say it would be the pacing, some parts were too fast for me to understand. I hope the company gets back to you and hires you.
ReplyDeleteHi HuiHao, thank you for the comment. I appreciate the constructive feedback, will definitely take note on my pacing in my future speaking, making sure that my words would project out clearly and loudly. Once again, thank you!
DeleteYour pitch was very detailed, providing many examples on how you can contribute back to the company through the various experiences you have. It can be nerve-wracking to present in front of a camera, but you show confidence through your body language and words.
ReplyDeleteHello Nathan, thank you for taking the time to comment on my post. Personally felt that I could have done much better but I really appreciate your kind words, it has definitely encouraged me a little more. Will definitely display more confidence through my body language and words in the future. Thank you once again for your uplifting comment!
DeleteThank you, Kristine, for this highly detailed and well delivered pitch!
ReplyDeleteHi Prof, thanks for your comment on my post! Your feedback means a lot and I really appreciate your support.
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